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Death toll from China quake rises to nearly 12,000.

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Death toll from China quake approaches 12,000








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Reply:Rising by the hour: death toll from earthquake in central China, now at: 20,000


Edit - I'm not sure why I have been given 2 thumbs down for updating this awful news.
Reply:China earthquake toll: nears12,000 and still counting.
Reply:Death toll of China's quake rises to nearly 12,000
Reply:Nearly 12,000 death toll from China quake; still rising...